How's My Driving?

Pretty sure you know the drill by now. Constructive criticism, comments, and all manner of outside input on my characterization of James Vega can go here.

I am extremely new at him, so please feel free to let me know where to direct my attention and what needs tweaking. I apologize in advance for my terrible Spanish, as I have absolutely no experience with the language.

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